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Tales of Vesperia



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הוסף מסר

1/2009

The End!!


כמו שהבטחתי.. עבר שבוע והנה החלק השני והאחרון של הסיפור.. מקווה שתאהבו ואל תשכחו להגיב!

 

She left him there, sitting stiff on the bed. He waited a minute for her to come back, he wished she would come back to him! Suddenly he saw nothing, only darkness wraping him. His breath became heavier and slower as the darkness grew. A sedden pain in the chest drew the darkness away. The pain was as though some one just speared his heart. After the pain eased a bit he got up and went out to the balcony. When he slid the door asaide his face were hit by the cold mid-summer night wind. The wind was cold and it felt as though his face was being cut. When he was looking down he saw her driving away. Just as he saw a tear ping down it started to rain. The rain was pooring down hard on his head and the wind became colder. He was wet to the bone but it didn't bother him. Even the wind stopped and the coldness disappeared. He could here nothing because of the rain but when he looked down he saw a car parking downstair. Suddenly he heard a knock on the door. He started to move slowly toward the wooden door but he couldn't touch it. The knob just slipped out of his hand every time and meanwhile the knocks became stronger and more rapid. He thoought that whoever was knocking is gonna rip out the door! Suddenly he saw red lights outside. He ran to the balcony and discovered that the lights came form an ambulance. He turned around quickly to the sound of a collapsing door and saw guys in white robes coming in. From the colour of their clothes he knew they were paramadics and he saw that same brunette coming in with them. She was crying. He never saw some one crying that hard, not even himself. They all gathered around something that was lying on the floor. He tried to see what it was but failed. After a few minutes of attempts and failures he finally saw what it was. It was him! But how could that be? He was standing right here! The brunette continued to cry while the paramedics tried to help him get back to life but failed. She cried even harder after the doctor sopke. The doctors opinion was clear! He got up, took off the gloves and robe and said sadly:"He died of a BROKEN HEART"

 

זה הסוף!!! מקווה שאהבתם ואל תשכחו להגיב! [סיפור הבא יהיה בעברית למי שלא הבין את הסיפור הזה XD]

נכתב על ידי , 25/1/2009 14:55  
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הגעתי להחלטה!


החלטתי שאין לי יותר כוח לכתוב בבלוג סתם.. אז אני מפסיק עם זה!!!

אני מתחיל להעלות לבלוג הזה רק סיפורים שאני כותב.. בזמן האחרון לא יוצא לי ככך.. אבל עכשיו כן כי אני בעונש XD

אז אני מקווה שתהנו מהסיפורים שלי ואל תרחמו עלי בביקורת...

 

Broken Heart

 

He sat there alone. It was a late and it was dark outside but he still didn't turn the lights. Something in the darkness that surrounded the room astonished him. He sat still on the bed, only listening to the noises of the dark that came into the room from outside. He heard the cars speeding on the Highway road, the shouting of the urguing neighbors and the clock ticking as time passes on. He continued to sit there until he heard a car screech and park below the building. He went out to the balcony but saw nothing. A few minutes later he heard some one  knocking on the door. When he opened the door he saw the most beautiful brunette he had ever seen. Her hair was long, brown and smooth. Her lips were red and filled with passion. He was amazed that such woman came to him. He couldn't see her face, so he went towards the bed and turned on the light. He froze when he saw who she was. It's the woman he loved deeply! The woman he was always dreaming about. She crowled on the deb and gave him a big passion-filled kiss. He kissed her back and the silence and darknesswere gone like they never existed. Suddenly she stopped, got up and left...

 

מקווה שנהנתם מהחלק הראשון של הסיפור.. אני אעלה את השני עוד שבוע.. תקראו ותגיבו!

נכתב על ידי , 19/1/2009 13:46   בקטגוריות סיפרותי  
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